My Somalia story

Hello welcome to my blog. So today I have my Somalia story to show you. Its about this video here is a link to it. I hope you enjoy my story.

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots or the pirates.

It was sunrise in the deep blue diamond sea. There was an enormous ship, then next to it was two little boats with pirates on them.

The enormous ship was full of crates.

“I wonder what's in it?”

“I here something” said captain.

“Pirates are over boarding our ship”.

The pirates start to take over the butcher's kitchen and hold them hostage.

One of the pirates go to the captain and knock his coffee cup out of his hand and he says

“You know who I am i'm the new captain”

He takes captains hat away from him.

“give me the keys GIVE ME THE KEY”

The pirate said well I should say the new captain he put the key in the machine and it powered the us the Robots.

The pirates start to look for their treasure they look in one of the crates but there is nothing in it. “Wait where's our tresher

”They hear a noise from behind them”.

Then they take a look and they find the us.

I say boop, and scare the pirates away. One of the pirates were running past a corner of the ship then I was there and I tripped the pirate up.

We were flying everywhere I was rolling the pirates in tinfoil. We were carrying the pirates and we high fived each other. One of the pirates were ready to shot. I came out and I had this screen on my belly, it had all these bugs on the screen, the pirate got so scared he jump of the enormous ship and landed in the water.

I took the pirates out, then I taped on his shoulder and I pointed out the window, so he could see all of us there were like a million. He was surprised and scared at the same time. He was scared because we were choking the pirates, and he was surprised about how many of us there were.

Then I took the hat and key of the fake Captain and gave it to the real Captain. Now we must go back Bye.

“Bye” said the Captain.

The end Of my Somalia story.

Writing this story was really hared but watching the video over and over again it got me thinking about what I can write.

I hoped you like my blog post and have a nice week end bye.

My Buster the boxer story

Hi and welcome back to my blog, today I have a story to show you about a dog named Buster. Busters bread is a boxer and I'm here to tell you a little bit about him.

WALT write a narrative through the eyes of Buster

here is my story.

Hi Im Buster the boxer, it was Christmas eve and how do I know it's Christmas eve well it's snowy and there are Christmas decorations around the house.

It was a cold snowy night, I was watching Emma jump up and down on her bed. Then mum walked in and said

“ calm down and go to bed “.

so I got out of her bedroom and watched dad build a um build a l don't know what dad is building.

Huh what's that ohhh it is just a couple of foxes, wait what are they doing there going on that bouncy thing, ohhh they bouncing on it.

“ waaaa hooooo this is so fun” said the foxes. here comes a badger

“ wait what do I do?”

“ ohhhh that's what I do yippeeee this is so fun” said the badger. I’m so MAD because there on that….. thing and they look like they're having fun but I'm stuck inside here. I know they shouldn't be on it.

Here comes the bright an early sunny sun on Christmas morning maybe I should go on it no no no no no I will get in big trouble. I see dad open the door and I see Emma running out of the door, and then I follow her then she starts running so fast so I run in front of her onto the trampoline I found out it was called that, so I run faster and faster till I get onto the trampoline. I start to jump like I've never jumped before and Emma is just watching me so I stop jumping for a second and look at Emma is she mad, sad, happy to see a jumping dog. I start jumping again but I see Emma’s parents looking at me. Right now I don't care I’m just so thrilled that I'm on that trampoline It really is a gift everyone will love.

I hoped you enjoyed my story It was really hard to write but i got some better ideas from other people.

My speech about the Bermuda Trinagle

Hi guys welcome back to my blog. I'm here today to show you my speech about the Bermuda Triangle. For writing we had to do a speech about what group we are in for a mysteries. 

I hope you enjoyed and have a fun safe and nice weekend.

My Spencer park writing

Hi and welcome to my blog I'm going to show you my writing about Spencer park trip. Here is my writing.

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience. Success Criteria I know I will be successful when…. I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report. The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt. Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground. A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

 Spencer park trip

On Friday 10th of March half of the school went to Spencer Park. We had to get numbers written on a hand to show what group we are In. There were four groups and I was number three. When we got to Spencer Park and we had to get letters written on our hands my one was E.

First we went on a lagoon walk and we saw horses and they were pooing! We went up a staircase and saw spider webs in the long dry grass. We saw the trees that were so far away.

Next at 11.00 we went back to have morning tea at the playground. I sat with my friends Alexis and Addyson. In my lunch I had sandwiches, two packs of lollies strings, a muffin and a bag of chips.

Finally we went to the Spencer Park beach to collect things to make a sculpture when we got back to school. At the beach I collected three shells, three sticks and a feather. I thought I would make a heart and have my shells as the eyes and the ears.

I had so much fun at Spencer Park It was awesome and my favourite part was when we went to the beach.

I hoped you enjoyed my writing and have a nice day and please comment and I will reply to all of you. :D

My writing

This is my Writing that I done for writing and we had to write about 25 year old self and here is my writing.

Dear future me……

By the time you're reading this you may be 25, well I’m ten. In life I haven't achieved my goals yet. One of my goals are being a youtuber. I bet you have achieved nearly all your goals.

I hope you have had a good fifteen years without me and I hope you have good years for the rest of your life, you are the best. I hope you have the best friends ever in the world.

You are my future like you always have been. You're the greatest and you always will be.

Your one and only, you’re ten year old self.

Hoped you enjoyed please leave a comment. :D

My recount

On the last week of the holidays, I went to Hornby Mall with lots of my friends and family. There was Sharney, Phenix, Rillie, Ella, Cooper, Pippa and my older sister Tamara. We went to see Elgrego the magician at the shop. We're hoping to have lots of fun together.

It was Cooper’s birthday and we went to Ashburton to the Domain Park to watch cricket, to go on the zipline, play in the pools and we played in the playground for a very long time.

At the park we ordered pizza and we got about 6 different pizzas but only ate two pizzas but it was very yummy. We ordered pepperoni, meat lovers and hawaiian.

We got back from Ashburton and we ate the rest of the Coopers birthday cake. We had some lunch which was really really yummy. Cooper got a lot of presents and he had only turned 4.

I feel happy that we got to see El Grego, we got to go to Ashburton and it was Cooper’s birthday. I had lots of fun in Ashburton with my friends and family we had a lot of fun together.

I hope that you enjoyed my story about my holiday and hope you have a great day.

my horrible adventurer in space

For a week in writing we had to do a presentation of our story we wrote about a space chimp. I liked how I worked fast. Next time I would use more punctuation.


I hope you enjoy it.

My writing

This is my writing that the class had to do about a space chimp.
Hope you enjoy :D

W.A.L.T write a narrative

	Punctuation	Vocabulary
Self	R4 or R5
Peer	R3

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

Heres my story.

5, 4, 3, 2, 1, with a big bang I got blasted Into space. The people who blasted me Into space had to do a test on me to see how long I can stay In space for. I slept In space for 65 years and never woke up. I am lucky that I got to bring a picture of my trainer Jack. Jack raised me from a Little chimp and now I am a fully grown chimp. Now I know how It feels to be alone for 65 years. I wish that they didn't have to do a test on me. I would rather stay wIth my traIner for the rest of my life. I am so so disappointed that I had to go to space alone. I am so lonely In space, It’s so boring In space. Space Is the one thing that I do not  want to go to ever In my life. SomethIng hIt my eye. I started to smIle and I saId, “It’s erath!” and It was, the best thing ever I saw earth” and I got closer and closer to earth every second, and I came crashIng down to earth. A bumpy rIde home made me feel sick. My capsule crashed onto the ground and I escaped It. I got home and It was destroyed, smoke was comIng out of trees, dry grass graffItI art was everywhere and the ferrIs wheel was broken. I fell on my knees and I had a tear In my eye and I crIed. I was so dIsappoInted that my home was destroyed Into pIeces.

Terra ferma  

Chapter 2

I got out of the rocket and yelled “Jack Jack where are you!!” no replIes It was sIlence. I ran and ran and ran!! And I collapsed on the hard solId ground and I fell asleep. I was asleep for a long tIme, but a crowd of humans came and saved me. but I recognIsed someone and I thought for a mInute and I knew who It was. It's jack he came back for me but I don't know If he knows It's me. but he came up to me and saId “conrad conrad can you hear me It's me Jack.”

and I saId “hI… hI Jack Is It really you?”

“yes conrad It Is me.” Jack grabbed me and took me to hIs house to stay. but Jack had no chImp food for me. I was starvIng for some food, I haven't had food for ages. I feel lIke that Jack dIdn't care about me anymore. I need revenge on Jack for not gettIng me food. hmmm how would I get revenge on jack for not gettIng me food. I know I wIll steal hIs scIence stuff that he had used to cure me from collapsIng. But how would I steal them hmmm. Maybe when he is a sleep i can steal them, he, he, he. Jack said “what are you doing conrad?” I didn't reply because i was hungry. I went to bed to pretend to sleep so i can steal the science stuff. Then he came into the room to check on me but he caught me awake and i was planning a plan to steal. I did steal in the morning when he was sleeping and he didn't catch me. but i spilt the potion on me and i died..........

The end

Hope's space chimp planning

This is a planning of my story called space chimp.

My adaptation clay model.

I have been working on doing clay adaptation for a humpback whale's fin, and It was really hard and I had to do It three times.
Here are some photos of my humpback whale's fin.
I Hope you Enjoy.

humpback whales grow up to be 52 feet (16 m) long weighing 30-50 tons (27-45 tonnes.

Hope's learning goals master.

• My learning goals are to show what I have been learning In class.
• I'm going to show my work to my Mum and show her what I have been learning about.
• here Is my awesome learning goals.  

Hope you enjoy.

My worst day ever (second draft)

                    

My worst day ever.

One warm summer day on December 14, I was migrating with my family by the African Savannah river.  Then my herd and I  stopped peeked around the corner and then I got a thought in my head, that things are getting freaky. Suddenly I can feel what's going to happen around the corner, it tasted like it was going to be my worst nightmare ever in my life.        

And it was. My herd and I saw lions then we had to run. It felt like they were getting closer and closer and then Pow!!! I got tackled by the pride of lions. Then I fell in the salty water and I looked all muddy and my fur is all sticky.  Then a crocodile came along and I felt a big sharp Snap!!! A crocodile bit my tail, and then the lions and the crocodile were playing tug of war with me and used me as the rope. The lions won the game of tug of war and they pulled me out of the water so they can try eat me. I thought that my herd left me here to get eaten by the lions. Then they came back with the rest of my family and tackled the lions so the lions had to run away. Then the lions got scared of my dad and ran.

I’m so glad that I’m back with my family again and I will never see those lions again ever in my life. That was really my first ever worst nightmare.