Hi and welcome back to my blog, today I have a story to show you about a dog named Buster. Busters bread is a boxer and I'm here to tell you a little bit about him.
WALT write a narrative through the eyes of Buster
here is my story.
Hi Im Buster the boxer, it was Christmas eve and how do I know it's Christmas eve well it's snowy and there are Christmas decorations around the house.
It was a cold snowy night, I was watching Emma jump up and down on her bed. Then mum walked in and said
“ calm down and go to bed “.
so I got out of her bedroom and watched dad build a um build a l don't know what dad is building.
Huh what's that ohhh it is just a couple of foxes, wait what are they doing there going on that bouncy thing, ohhh they bouncing on it.
“ waaaa hooooo this is so fun” said the foxes. here comes a badger
“ wait what do I do?”
“ ohhhh that's what I do yippeeee this is so fun” said the badger. I’m so MAD because there on that….. thing and they look like they're having fun but I'm stuck inside here. I know they shouldn't be on it.
Here comes the bright an early sunny sun on Christmas morning maybe I should go on it no no no no no I will get in big trouble. I see dad open the door and I see Emma running out of the door, and then I follow her then she starts running so fast so I run in front of her onto the trampoline I found out it was called that, so I run faster and faster till I get onto the trampoline. I start to jump like I've never jumped before and Emma is just watching me so I stop jumping for a second and look at Emma is she mad, sad, happy to see a jumping dog. I start jumping again but I see Emma’s parents looking at me. Right now I don't care I’m just so thrilled that I'm on that trampoline It really is a gift everyone will love.
I hoped you enjoyed my story It was really hard to write but i got some better ideas from other people.
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