WALT write a narrative through the eyes of one of the crew, or robots or the pirates.
It was sunrise in the deep blue diamond sea. There was an enormous ship, then next to it was two little boats with pirates on them.
The enormous ship was full of crates.
“I wonder what's in it?”
“I here something” said captain.
“Pirates are over boarding our ship”.
The pirates start to take over the butcher's kitchen and hold them hostage.
One of the pirates go to the captain and knock his coffee cup out of his hand and he says
“You know who I am i'm the new captain”
He takes captains hat away from him.
“give me the keys GIVE ME THE KEY”
The pirate said well I should say the new captain he put the key in the machine and it powered the us the Robots.
The pirates start to look for their treasure they look in one of the crates but there is nothing in it. “Wait where's our tresher
”They hear a noise from behind them”.
Then they take a look and they find the us.
I say boop, and scare the pirates away. One of the pirates were running past a corner of the ship then I was there and I tripped the pirate up.
We were flying everywhere I was rolling the pirates in tinfoil. We were carrying the pirates and we high fived each other. One of the pirates were ready to shot. I came out and I had this screen on my belly, it had all these bugs on the screen, the pirate got so scared he jump of the enormous ship and landed in the water.
I took the pirates out, then I taped on his shoulder and I pointed out the window, so he could see all of us there were like a million. He was surprised and scared at the same time. He was scared because we were choking the pirates, and he was surprised about how many of us there were.
Then I took the hat and key of the fake Captain and gave it to the real Captain. Now we must go back Bye.
“Bye” said the Captain.
The end Of my Somalia story.
Writing this story was really hared but watching the video over and over again it got me thinking about what I can write.
I hoped you like my blog post and have a nice week end bye.
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