My Spencer park writing

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W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience. Success Criteria I know I will be successful when…. I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report. The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt. Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground. A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.

 Spencer park trip

On Friday 10th of March half of the school went to Spencer Park. We had to get numbers written on a hand to show what group we are In. There were four groups and I was number three. When we got to Spencer Park and we had to get letters written on our hands my one was E.

First we went on a lagoon walk and we saw horses and they were pooing! We went up a staircase and saw spider webs in the long dry grass. We saw the trees that were so far away.

Next at 11.00 we went back to have morning tea at the playground. I sat with my friends Alexis and Addyson. In my lunch I had sandwiches, two packs of lollies strings, a muffin and a bag of chips.

Finally we went to the Spencer Park beach to collect things to make a sculpture when we got back to school. At the beach I collected three shells, three sticks and a feather. I thought I would make a heart and have my shells as the eyes and the ears.

I had so much fun at Spencer Park It was awesome and my favourite part was when we went to the beach.

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