Number the stars character description

Hi bloggers. Today I'm going to show you a slide on a book called number the stars. The author of this book is Lois Lowry. It would be really good if I get some feedback on my character traits. A character traits is a slide show were you put information from a character onto a slide. You make your own version of who and how you think that person is and looks like. here is a photo of one of my slides.

My work is in progress. I skim read chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4. I hope you give me a lot of feedback for my character traits. The book is about the danish and the Germans. a Danish means your Jewish. The Germans wanted to take over the Jewish side of Germany. In the book Annemarie has a friend called Ellen and she is Jewish.

I hope you will give me feedback. A feed ford is my next step. My feed ford is making sure I read the book more carefully.