Here is a powtoon about my lies and truth my class made at school in writing.
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I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 9 and in 2021 I will be a year 10. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, December 2, 2016
Thursday, December 1, 2016
My powtoon
This week my class have been working on a Powtoon and Year Six had to work on their time at Hornby Primary School and Year Five had to work on this year.
Here is a link to my powtoon
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Please leave a comment. :D
Here is a link to my powtoon
Please click here for my powtoon
Please leave a comment. :D
My writing
This is my Writing that I done for writing and we had to write about 25 year old self and here is my writing.
Your one and only, you’re ten year old self.
Hoped you enjoyed please leave a comment. :D
Dear future me……
By the time you're reading this you may be 25, well I’m ten. In life I haven't achieved my goals yet. One of my goals are being a youtuber. I bet you have achieved nearly all your goals.
I hope you have had a good fifteen years without me and I hope you have good years for the rest of your life, you are the best. I hope you have the best friends ever in the world.
You are my future like you always have been. You're the greatest and you always will be.
Hoped you enjoyed please leave a comment. :D
Friday, November 18, 2016
My Diwali presention
This is my Diwali presentation I hope you enjoy
please leave a comment and have great day. :D
please leave a comment and have great day. :D
Wednesday, November 16, 2016
earthquake DLO
Here is a slideshow of the earthquake.
Hope you enjoyed my slideshow please leave a comment. :D
Friday, October 21, 2016
My recount
On the last week of the holidays, I went to Hornby Mall with lots of my friends and family. There was Sharney, Phenix, Rillie, Ella, Cooper, Pippa and my older sister Tamara. We went to see Elgrego the magician at the shop. We're hoping to have lots of fun together.
It was Cooper’s birthday and we went to Ashburton to the Domain Park to watch cricket, to go on the zipline, play in the pools and we played in the playground for a very long time.
At the park we ordered pizza and we got about 6 different pizzas but only ate two pizzas but it was very yummy. We ordered pepperoni, meat lovers and hawaiian.
We got back from Ashburton and we ate the rest of the Coopers birthday cake. We had some lunch which was really really yummy. Cooper got a lot of presents and he had only turned 4.
I feel happy that we got to see El Grego, we got to go to Ashburton and it was Cooper’s birthday. I had lots of fun in Ashburton with my friends and family we had a lot of fun together.
I hope that you enjoyed my story about my holiday and hope you have a great day.
Monday, October 10, 2016
Swimming time
Friday, September 23, 2016
Evil Zombie Teachers
The past term my class has been making films. We had to make a group and start planning and do a storyboard. My film is called Evil Zombie Teachers. My group worked well together and we came up with Evil Zombie Teachers. We had lots of fun making this movie and we messed up a few times but we got it done.
This is a photo of my groups poster we made.
This is a photo of my groups poster we made.
The movie was challenging but i got out of my comfort zone and I made a movie with my friends.
Hope you enjoy :D Please leave a comment.
Labels:
evil zombie teachers,
film Festival,
movie,
term 3,
topic
Friday, September 16, 2016
My Movie
These past weeks we have been working on movies in groups and my group was Alexis, Kortney, Danielle, Addyson and myself. On Thursday 22 of September we are having a film festival. The name of our movie is, Evil Zombie Teachers and it took us two days too film. Here is a photo of us working on our film.
Hope you enjoy :)
Hope you enjoy :)
Labels:
film Festival,
I movie,
term 3 2016,
topic.,
week 8
Friday, September 9, 2016
my horrible adventurer in space
Friday, September 2, 2016
My facts about Bottlenose Dolphins
This week my Reading group had to read a book called Opo's summer and we had to do facts about Opo the Dolphin or Bottlenose Dolphins because Opo is a Bottlenose dolphin and I did Bottlenose Dolphins facts.
I hope you enjoy and don't forget to comment.
Friday, August 26, 2016
My Olympics quiz
I hope you like my Olympic quiz.
Try to guess as many as you can.
Hope you enjoy :D
Try to guess as many as you can.
Hope you enjoy :D
My writing
This is my writing that the class had to do about a space chimp.
Hope you enjoy :D
W.A.L.T write a narrative
Heres my story.
The end
Hope you enjoy :D
W.A.L.T write a narrative
Punctuation
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Vocabulary
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Self
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R4 or R5
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Peer
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R3
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Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
- The title is suitable for the text.
- The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
- The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
- The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
- Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.
Heres my story.
5, 4, 3, 2, 1, with a big bang I got blasted Into space. The people who blasted me Into space had to do a test on me to see how long I can stay In space for. I slept In space for 65 years and never woke up. I am lucky that I got to bring a picture of my trainer Jack. Jack raised me from a Little chimp and now I am a fully grown chimp. Now I know how It feels to be alone for 65 years. I wish that they didn't have to do a test on me. I would rather stay wIth my traIner for the rest of my life. I am so so disappointed that I had to go to space alone. I am so lonely In space, It’s so boring In space. Space Is the one thing that I do not want to go to ever In my life. SomethIng hIt my eye. I started to smIle and I saId, “It’s erath!” and It was, the best thing ever I saw earth” and I got closer and closer to earth every second, and I came crashIng down to earth. A bumpy rIde home made me feel sick. My capsule crashed onto the ground and I escaped It. I got home and It was destroyed, smoke was comIng out of trees, dry grass graffItI art was everywhere and the ferrIs wheel was broken. I fell on my knees and I had a tear In my eye and I crIed. I was so dIsappoInted that my home was destroyed Into pIeces.
Terra ferma
Chapter 2
I got out of the rocket and yelled “Jack Jack where are you!!” no replIes It was sIlence. I ran and ran and ran!! And I collapsed on the hard solId ground and I fell asleep. I was asleep for a long tIme, but a crowd of humans came and saved me. but I recognIsed someone and I thought for a mInute and I knew who It was. It's jack he came back for me but I don't know If he knows It's me. but he came up to me and saId “conrad conrad can you hear me It's me Jack.”
and I saId “hI… hI Jack Is It really you?”
“yes conrad It Is me.” Jack grabbed me and took me to hIs house to stay. but Jack had no chImp food for me. I was starvIng for some food, I haven't had food for ages. I feel lIke that Jack dIdn't care about me anymore. I need revenge on Jack for not gettIng me food. hmmm how would I get revenge on jack for not gettIng me food. I know I wIll steal hIs scIence stuff that he had used to cure me from collapsIng. But how would I steal them hmmm. Maybe when he is a sleep i can steal them, he, he, he. Jack said “what are you doing conrad?” I didn't reply because i was hungry. I went to bed to pretend to sleep so i can steal the science stuff. Then he came into the room to check on me but he caught me awake and i was planning a plan to steal. I did steal in the morning when he was sleeping and he didn't catch me. but i spilt the potion on me and i died..........
The end
Labels:
first draft,
narrative,
space chimp,
term 3 2016,
writing
My vocabulary word wall
This is my word wall of skydiving.
hope you enjoy.
My reading class had to do a independent tasks and we got to pick what one we want to do out of, word wall, read fluently, epic, Olympic quiz, dance mat typing, into the book, the big idea and listen to reading.
hope you enjoy.
My reading class had to do a independent tasks and we got to pick what one we want to do out of, word wall, read fluently, epic, Olympic quiz, dance mat typing, into the book, the big idea and listen to reading.
Thursday, August 25, 2016
My division facts
W.A.L.T use different strategies to solve division facts.
Hope you enjoy.
Hope you enjoy.
Friday, August 12, 2016
Hopes ride of the katipo
This is my ride of the Katipo for reading this book has 15 chapters that I had to read.
Hope you enjoy. :D :D
Hope you enjoy. :D :D
This is my DLO for reading
In reading my group had to read a book called Ride of the Katipo. It was really long but I finished it.
Friday, July 29, 2016
Hope's space chimp planning
Labels:
mindmup,
narrative,
planning,
space chimp,
term 3 2016,
writing
Friday, July 1, 2016
My adaptation clay model.
I have been working on doing clay adaptation for a humpback whale's fin, and It was really hard and I had to do It three times.
Here are some photos of my humpback whale's fin.
I Hope you Enjoy.
Here are some photos of my humpback whale's fin.
I Hope you Enjoy.
humpback whales grow up to be 52 feet (16 m) long weighing 30-50 tons (27-45 tonnes.
Wednesday, June 29, 2016
Hope's learning goals master.
- My learning goals are to show what I have been learning In class.
- I'm going to show my work to my Mum and show her what I have been learning about.
- here Is my awesome learning goals.
Hope you enjoy.
Labels:
math,
mid year reflection,
reading,
what I'm proud of.,
writing
Friday, June 10, 2016
My worst day ever (second draft)
My worst day ever.
One warm summer day on December 14, I was migrating with my family by the African Savannah river. Then my herd and I stopped peeked around the corner and then I got a thought in my head, that things are getting freaky. Suddenly I can feel what's going to happen around the corner, it tasted like it was going to be my worst nightmare ever in my life.
And it was. My herd and I saw lions then we had to run. It felt like they were getting closer and closer and then Pow!!! I got tackled by the pride of lions. Then I fell in the salty water and I looked all muddy and my fur is all sticky. Then a crocodile came along and I felt a big sharp Snap!!! A crocodile bit my tail, and then the lions and the crocodile were playing tug of war with me and used me as the rope. The lions won the game of tug of war and they pulled me out of the water so they can try eat me. I thought that my herd left me here to get eaten by the lions. Then they came back with the rest of my family and tackled the lions so the lions had to run away. Then the lions got scared of my dad and ran.
I’m so glad that I’m back with my family again and I will never see those lions again ever in my life. That was really my first ever worst nightmare.
Friday, June 3, 2016
Thursday, May 26, 2016
Tuesday, May 24, 2016
My bad day ( first draft)
W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
- Title
- Orientation: When? Who? Where? Why?
- Sequence of events: What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
- Personal Comment: How did the events make you feel?
First draft.
My bad day.
One summer day I was walking with my family by the african savannah river. Then we stopped peeked around the corner then started to walk again. Then we stopped again then I saw moving grass then we realized they were lions. Then we started to run as fast as we can then I got tackled by the lions and we pushed each other into the river and the lions started to try eat me but an crocodile came along and the crocodile grabbed me.
Then we stopped peeked around the corner then the herd started to walk again. Then we stopped again. Then we saw lions. Then we started to run as fast as we can and I feel terrified because i feel like the lions are getting closer and closer then bam I got attack by the herd of lions it feeled like I can burst out with bloud. Then I got tackled by the lions and we pushed each other into the river and the lions started to try eat me but a crocodile came along and the crocodile grab me. It feels like they were playing tug of war but used me as a rope. But the crocodile left and I esgate the lions and i'm am so glad that I esgate the lions and I feel please that i'm back with my family so my dad attack the lion and the lion ran as fast as they can to get away from my herd.
Then we stopped peeked around the corner then the herd started to walk again. Then we stopped again. Then we saw lions. Then we started to run as fast as we can and I feel terrified because i feel like the lions are getting closer and closer then bam I got attack by the herd of lions it feeled like I can burst out with bloud. Then I got tackled by the lions and we pushed each other into the river and the lions started to try eat me but a crocodile came along and the crocodile grab me. It feels like they were playing tug of war but used me as a rope. But the crocodile left and I esgate the lions and i'm am so glad that I esgate the lions and I feel please that i'm back with my family so my dad attack the lion and the lion ran as fast as they can to get away from my herd.
I’m am so glad that I’m with my family to have fun.
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