Over the last few weeks we have written a piece of narrative writing. I am going to share with you my piece of writing.
Unicorns Vs Men:
One warm sunny day a herd of Unicorns were discovered by a group of men. Their names were Alexander, Jack, Brad and Derek. 1827 is the date the Unicorns were discovered. Alexander, Jack, Brad and Derek discovered the Unicorns in the middle of South West Rain Forest. They then took the Unicorns they discovered back to their campground that they were staying at.
They then began to find out more information about them. They found out their names, which is Vivion, Penelope, Mia and Livie. They instantly knew that they were going to adopt the Unicorns. They were thinking about it and made their decision.
So Brad and Derek made their own cabin in the woods. While Alexander and Jack went back to their house in Transylvania and gathered all their stuff and went back to their modern wood cabin. Their cabin looked like it was professionally made, It was amazing.
They then decided to sort out everything tomorrow so they could have some food. Lucky Alexander and Jack got all the food so they could cook up some meals. They went upstairs to cook some mac and cheese and cheese pizza, It was delicious.
The next day…
So the men started to wake up, they didn’t realize where their Unicorns were. Derek had gotten up and gone outside to see if there was any sign of them. Derek went so far down the path he couldn’t see the cabin, all he could see was the fog going further and further. The pathway had ended and there was still no sign of the Unicorns. Derek went further and further, there was no ground left to walk on. Derek was thinking they couldn’t have gone this far. So Derek just went back to the cabin.
He informed his brothers that he did not know where they were. “ I went so far down the path still no sign of them,” Derek said. Everybody Instantly went looking for them. They looked everywhere, Inside and out. Still no sign of them. Little did they know the Unicorns actually made their own cabin with their magical corn powers.
Vivion, Penelope, Mia and Livie made like one of the best cabins that could ever be seen in the Rainforest. It had Blue, Purple and Pink wood. It had these amazing LED lights that were engraved into the wood. They Unicorns went back to the original cabin and they started up a huge fight with the men. The Unicorns started to use their magical corn powers to struct them down to the ground. The men couldn’t get up again they tried so had to fight back but nothing, they couldn’t do anything. The Unicorns just left to go back to their own cabin and just left the men there lying on the ground.
5 Weeks later….
Alexander, Jack, Brad and Derek finally reached out to some people and got the help they needed. Then they finally recovered and left the Rain Forest to go back to their original home in Transylvania. The Unicorns took over the Rain Forest and made it their own place for magical creatures. They made some new friends like Kermit the Frog, Gary the fast snail, Fantastico the Peanut, Tissue the ghost and Plankton the Green leaf. They all had heaps of fun being around each other and never saw sight of a human ever again. They lived their own lives in the South West Rain forest.
The End
I hope my story makes senses to you and you like it :D
Bye!