My work is in progress. I skim read chapters 1, 2, 3, and 4. I hope you give me a lot of feedback for my character traits. The book is about the danish and the Germans. a Danish means your Jewish. The Germans wanted to take over the Jewish side of Germany. In the book Annemarie has a friend called Ellen and she is Jewish.
I hope you will give me feedback. A feed ford is my next step. My feed ford is making sure I read the book more carefully.
Wow, Hope, this is a truly amazing blog post you have written some amazing things about the book, it makes me a little interested about the book. I really liked you picture about the character it gives me a good explanation about the character. Anyways check your sentence when you said "Annemarie and Ellen are pretending that they are sisters because they mama and papa told them so." That part has a little mistake in it so please check it. Maybe next time you should give a little bit more details about their life and some evidence about them. But anyways, Bye!
ReplyDeleteHello Hope,I really think that this blog post is amazing, it has lots of information about what a character trait is and I think lots of other people will soon be able to use it. What I think you should do better is go through it and read it before you post it because I read lots of parts that didn't make seance. but apart from that I think it's incredible.
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