Hi guys today i'm going to show you my writing story. The story is about a sad cloud and a stork that delivers stuff for the sad cloud. here is a video if you want to watch it and get more information about my story.
Hi my name is Charlie and I'm a stork that does deliveries to all of the humans in the city and this is my story. The sky looked like it was making candy floss because the clouds were pretty pink, soft and fluffy like a unicorn. The sky was a cute baby blue like clean pretty water. The clouds looked like pink gingerbread men.
I just finished my delivery. Me and my friends delivered a baby, two cute and furry kittens and two playful puppys. We start to head back to our cloudy friends the ones who make our deliveries. We go through the pink fluffy soft clouds. Now where at the land of storks and clouds.
Our friends look like top hats but they're not hats they're just clouds that live the best life. Our clouds turn around and gives us our deliveries. All of the clouds make animals or babies for us to deliver. We all have our own cloud that makes us deliveries but sadly i'm the odd one out. All my friends got back to there happy clouds but I don't have a happy cloud my cloud is different to the rest. My cloud and I live on the bottom of all the happy clouds. My cloud tries so hard to make a happy animal but he just makes animals that feel like himself. My clouds name is lonely. He tries to make himself happy but it never works he just makes dangerous and sad animals.
I finally get back home it takes so long to get back. I give lonely a wave then he gave me a gigantic hug in return and squeezed me to death and gives me a scratch on the nogon. I give him a little tweak on the nose. Then I wave my wings to ask him to give me my delivery. Lonely laughs and turns around to get a delivery for me. Lonely gives me a crocodile. I try to pat the crocodile but the crocodile just bites my head off. I yell out for help but I just pump the crocodile with air. I can feel his disgusting sharp rusty teeth sink into my head. Lonely pulls of the crocodile. I smile at the crocodile just a quick smile but then lonely gets sad and packs the crocodile up. Lonely passes me the crocodile to make a delivery. I grab the bag and the crocodile is shaking the bag. So finally i'm back. I see lonely making a animal but I dont know whats it is. lonely uses his powers and pull down the dust. Lonely shows me the animal but I don't know what it is. Lonely uses his magical powers and then I know what it is. It's a goat and it jumps at me in the guts. I laugh in pain. I laugh in a way that i thinks its funny but It was really not funny. Then I here all the happy animals and all my friends having fun. Lonely sees me smile at the rest of the happy animals. Now lonely starts to hug the goat in the bag. Lonely passes the bag to me and I fly of into the happy world of people only if the goat stops hitting me.
I'm back from my painful delivery and lonely looks sad. Lonely turns around and shows me an animal. I thought it was a sheep but as soon as lonely uses his magic powers of the sheep it turns into a porcupine. The porcupine got stuck in my feathers and I yell my lungs out. The porcupine go up into the air and falls back down on my feathers. Pricks were stuck on my feathers when the porcupine came down. It came down so hard and it hurt so bad it was like I was playing hot potato. Lonely takes the porcupine away from me. Lonely pats the porcupine without getting pricked and puts him in the bag. Now I have to get pricked again because his pricks stuck out of the bag.
I came back with a new painful hair doe. I had prickles on my bald head. I smile at lonely and he takes the prickles out of my head and rips out all my feathers from my head. Lonely takes my feathers of the prickles and sprinkles them back on my head. Lonely gives me a big hug and his eyes looked all watery and he was about to cry. Lonely lets go of the hug and he says “ohhh” and he turns around and gives me a shark but i’m lucky he hasn't used his powers on it yet. I scream and fall off the cloud. I see all the happy clouds having fun and Lonely looks at his shark and he passes it to me. I just fly away to one of my friends cloud. Im standing there talking to the cloud about lonely. I see that lonely starts to cry. Lonely pops his shark and he gets real mad he starts a thunderstorm. Lonely looks at the cloud and I. he sees that the clouds passing me a delivery. Lonely starts to cry again and he turns around and starts to make it rain. I fly back to Lonely and open the delivery I just gave him. I put the delivery on myself because it was a delivery from me to lonely for me. The delivery is padding so I can not get hurt by lonely’s animals and his hugs. Lonely starts to cry but he crys of happiness. Lonely gives me gigantic hug and now i'm not hurt because I've got my padding on. Lonely passes me an electric eel and i get electrocuted but i'm still happy.
The process of making this story it felt like I was under pressure because It took me so long to do and I didn't have enough time but when I re watched the video I got more ideas.
I hope you like my writing and have a safe and fun weekend. What I'm going to do next time is read more of my story especially if its really long.
