The present

Hi and welcome back to my blog. for the past weeks of school we have been writing about the present for writing. I hope you enjoy my story about the present. The Present

W.A.L.T:  Write a narrative

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when….

• The title is suitable for the text.

• The orientation tells who the story is about, and when and where the story happened.
• The complication describes a problem and explains what happened next.
• The resolution explains how the problem was solved.
• Seeks feedback and makes changes to texts to improve clarity and meaning.

The present

I was playing video games then mum made a bang and scared me. But then gave me a present I was looking at it I was thinking of what it could be Xbox 1, play station I don't know what it could be. I open the box something jumps out with excitement "cool a puppy". I look at the puppy and I see it only has three legs I was like get lost. I throw the puppy away I was trying to play my video games the puppy hit his head on the cabinet I laughed. Then he grabbed the ball I looked at the puppy and saw it was really clumsy and being silly. Trying to get a red ball and he gave the ball to me. I just kick it away it got into the box. The puppy got trapped in the box and lost the ball. Pup found the ball and started to eat it and chew it.  I said “Mum, we're going outside”.
The end

Cyber Smart DLO

On Thursday my class went to the high school next door for cyber safety with John Parsons. John Parsons gave us advice about cyber smart and cyber safety. We watched two videos about Cyber safety and cyber smart. He showed some photos and we had to answer questions about the photos and what's in the photos.

This gave me a lot of information about cyber safety and I was really happy.

Here is my DLO about asking permission.

Hope you enjoy and have a nice day. 

My lie and truth powtoon

Here is a powtoon about my lies and truth my class made at school in writing.


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My powtoon

This week my class have been working on a Powtoon and Year Six had to work on their time at Hornby Primary School and Year Five had to work on this year.

Here is a link to my powtoon

Please click here for my powtoon


Please leave a comment. :D

My writing

This is my Writing that I done for writing and we had to write about 25 year old self and here is my writing.

Dear future me……

By the time you're reading this you may be 25, well I’m ten. In life I haven't achieved my goals yet. One of my goals are being a youtuber. I bet you have achieved nearly all your goals.

I hope you have had a good fifteen years without me and I hope you have good years for the rest of your life, you are the best. I hope you have the best friends ever in the world.

You are my future like you always have been. You're the greatest and you always will be.

Your one and only, you’re ten year old self.

Hoped you enjoyed please leave a comment. :D

My Diwali presention

This is my Diwali presentation I hope you enjoy


please leave a comment and have great day. :D

earthquake DLO

Here is a slideshow of the earthquake. 

   
Hope you enjoyed my slideshow please leave a comment. :D